tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post1998127754405331783..comments2023-04-05T03:22:42.485-07:00Comments on Dodge Writes: Todays Prompt is finish this line with a MinuteJL Dodgehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-13078262568504887692011-03-10T23:20:47.444-08:002011-03-10T23:20:47.444-08:00yews but that is what makes it fun !!!yews but that is what makes it fun !!!JL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-46943357806887793612011-03-10T22:14:09.990-08:002011-03-10T22:14:09.990-08:00Well done Helena. This is a tough form I think. ...Well done Helena. This is a tough form I think. Not the easiest first line to follow either. Not much rhymes with clouds.Pennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-92177799534578460562011-03-10T21:51:05.860-08:002011-03-10T21:51:05.860-08:00Well done Helena,
I know how tough this form can ...Well done Helena, <br />I know how tough this form can be... I count and count and check it over as to how it sounds... I'm still not sure about the stressed/unstressed so I try to sing it ...LOL<br />I think we all did pretty well !JL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-73605559031283459932011-03-10T18:15:19.521-08:002011-03-10T18:15:19.521-08:00This was not easy! lol! Found a mistake in my firs...This was not easy! lol! Found a mistake in my first post...<br /><br />Divine Afterglow<br /><br />The moon-glow softly lit the clouds<br />Revealing crowds<br />The cluster stars<br />Both near and far<br /><br />Tree lined brilliant silken vines<br />Were in align<br />Spice wine to sip<br />A pleasure trip<br /><br />This was divine or so it seems<br />Sailing through beams<br />A wee more grape <br />To sweet escape<br /><br /><br /><br />♥ ஆεlεɳa ~.^Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-47402343428128023252011-03-10T18:09:26.279-08:002011-03-10T18:09:26.279-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Helena Whitehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03022290127423654311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-37790902005203851712011-03-10T17:17:47.798-08:002011-03-10T17:17:47.798-08:00Awe Penny, you just amaze me !!! Well done !!Awe Penny, you just amaze me !!! Well done !!JL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-45884755655564964272011-03-10T10:43:49.620-08:002011-03-10T10:43:49.620-08:00Tough act to follow but I'll try.
The moon-gl...Tough act to follow but I'll try.<br /><br />The moon-glow softly lit the clouds<br />That banked in crowds<br />As herded by<br />The winds on high.<br /><br />Like sheep they gathered in a mass<br />As each strong pass<br />Of pushing air<br />Did shove them there<br /><br />The moon in serene joy so smiled<br />To see them piled<br />Like candyfloss<br />With silver glossPennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11084508068938703918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594074870102559067.post-1319582124416102312011-03-10T09:47:41.749-08:002011-03-10T09:47:41.749-08:00This is just lovely. I love the minute form. There...This is just lovely. I love the minute form. There is a lilt to it.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.com