We would like to thank Shan for all the wonderful lessons on the Triolet, You have great advice, Shan... we all thank you !!
A quick re-cap – The features of the Triolet are:
* 8 lines.
* Two rhymes.
* 5 of the 8 lines are repeated or refrain lines.
* First line repeats at the 4th and 7th lines.
* Second line repeats at the 8th line.
* 8 lines.
* Two rhymes.
* 5 of the 8 lines are repeated or refrain lines.
* First line repeats at the 4th and 7th lines.
* Second line repeats at the 8th line.
An hour lost, or is it gained
the daylight beckons me again
once more my hands will be dirt stained
our garden beckons me again
my wish for spring I have campaigned
now like finding a long lost friend
the hour we lost is now gained
Spring time beckons me once again
YOUR TURN
ENJOY
JL&B
This triolet really shows your passion for gardening, and I thank you for writing it as this year is so busy for the constant gardener! I've been pruning my roses and weeding mine this afternoon with the help of my son! This is a great example of a subtle refrain changes for a triolet! Great job!
ReplyDeleteOh yes, spring beckons! You took me there Jl!
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Another great write. You are amazing. You took me there also. You always do. Thanks Susie
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