Reverse is a form with one 5-line stanza in a syllabic pattern of two, eight, six, four, two. (2,8,6,4,2)
Butterfly is a nine-line syllabic form with the pattern two, four, six, eight, two, eight, six, four, two. (2,4,6,8,2,8,6,4,2)
Mirror is a form with two 5-line stanzas consisting of a cinquain followed by a reverse cinquain. ( 2,4,6,8,2 2,8,6,4,2 )
So here we go... OURS IS...
Easter
Time of gathering family
remembrance of grace
heavenly love
Jesus
Colors
of pink and blue
pastels painted in skies
pictures of the love He bestows
matching
a young child's thrill of the hunt
for plastic pastel eggs
filled with candy
sweet treat
Gather
think of the Lord
all your beliefs in life
Play with your young ones while you can
Relax
enjoy
remember when you were once young
go ahead and let loose
Have a happy
Easter
This is my entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 42....check out all the wonderful poets !!
We thank Vinay & Jingle at the poets rally for this wonderful award...
We thank Vinay & Jingle at the poets rally for this wonderful award...
We are very honnored !!
YOUR TURNENJOY
JL&B
very colorful and smiling imagery.
ReplyDeleteHappy Easter.
enjoy the rally.
Thank you Jingle !!
ReplyDeleteVery nice and very cool! Im not sure I could have done that one. I may try one.
ReplyDeleteBlessings
"remember when you were once young
ReplyDeletego ahead and let loose..."
Very nice and very timely.
A most enjoyable poem.
Happy read! Thank you and Happy Easter :)
ReplyDeleteoh its a nice one! happy easter!
ReplyDeletewow! happy easter to you! my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/
ReplyDeleteVery nice.
ReplyDeleteWhat a tricky idea!
I've had a go...
βεℓℓα ♥ You are amazing! Happy Easter JL!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
ReplyDeleteThis was an enjoyable read.
Structured verses are fun
Though constricting
Sometimes.
;~)
well written cinquains! :) perfect for the time of the year!
ReplyDeletedelightful!
ReplyDeleteLuna
awesome cinquains.. Happy Easter.. a first ~ sweet ~ pour for you to enjoy...
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
awesome :)
ReplyDeletecool! A very happy Easter to ya!
ReplyDeleteI bet that one was tricky. Hope you have a Happy Easter!
ReplyDeleteExcellent job on this!
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