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My intent here is to write a poem from the prompt I give to you , the reader, in hopes that it will inspire something and get others to write with me.

Wednesday, September 7, 2011

Today's Prompt is Senryu Poetry + TWW

A Senryu is identical to the structure of a Haiku. It has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again. It is primarily concerned with human nature. It is often humorous or satiric.
We are joining forces today with Three Words Wensday @ http://www.threewordwednesday.com/  (one of our favorite places to join in on the prompts, ) This weeks words are...

Erode; verb: (Of wind, water, or other natural agents) gradually wear away (soil, rock, or land); gradually destroy or be gradually destroyed.
Heart; noun: A hollow muscular organ that pumps the blood through the circulatory system by rhythmic contraction and dilation; one's mood or feeling; the central or innermost part of something; verb: Like very much, love.
Observe; verb: notice or perceive (something) and register it as being significant; watch (someone or something) carefully and attentively; fulfill or comply with (a social, legal, ethical, or religious obligation).

OURS IS...

my disarrayed Heart
Observe how it still beats strong
as my thoughts Erode


YOUR TURN
ENJOY
JL&B

6 comments:

  1. Great use of the wordsGreat Haiku!
    You are so good at this JL!
    Blessings

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  2. Love your take on the prompt. Enjoying reading your work again.

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  3. I like the way you got the three little words in!

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  4. hearts beat on no through pain and happiness... :)

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