Well, this was lovely, and who cares about an extra 'mora'? Not me, because the intent of the tanka came flying through. And I can't find that extra mora. It's right on the mark!
An extra line though would be 'off with the head' offense. LOL!
JL, Joke! Depends on how you say it. In my local accent here it is definitely 2 syllables 'fie-ree' but I assumed you were using the correct English, I was having a laugh. Sorry, in a silly mood.
a very descriptive account of the emotion in the arrow of cupids bows.
ReplyDeleteJL! Your count is off in the second line! Shock Horror! LOL.
ReplyDeleteMMMmmm I swam in this ~ loved ~ Lib ( cute pic of puss ssshh won't wake him eek :)) ~
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Hi Richie !
ReplyDeletePenny...FI-er-y... that is three, right?
Thank you Lib, she is our baby !
Beautiful! well I learned something. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteWell, this was lovely, and who cares about an extra 'mora'? Not me, because the intent of the tanka came flying through. And I can't find that extra mora. It's right on the mark!
ReplyDeleteAn extra line though would be 'off with the head' offense. LOL!
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JL, Joke! Depends on how you say it. In my local accent here it is definitely 2 syllables 'fie-ree' but I assumed you were using the correct English, I was having a laugh. Sorry, in a silly mood.
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