This is a prompting Blog

My intent here is to write a poem from the prompt I give to you , the reader, in hopes that it will inspire something and get others to write with me.

Monday, July 25, 2011

FINISH THIS LINE...

We are making a change to Multi-prompt Monday, just as we did for WOW, we will now be doing a finish this line on Monday umtil further notice, we know you all will understand and thank you for your support !


The rules are you must use the line as the first line in prose or poetry.

Today's line is ...A SIMLPE WHITE PICKET FENCE ...
OURS IS:




A SIMPLE WHITE PICKET FENCE
surrounded a garden so fair
I walked that way every since
I saw that sweet garden there
Each day there was a new bloom
as if they grew by the hour
there wasn't very much room
but there were a whole lot of flowers

I could hardly wait to find
what flowers would bloom next
each day blew my mind
the colors so complex

Who would've thought a garden green
could bring feelings so immense
But thats what happened when I seen
A SIMPLE WHITE PICKET FENCE



YOUR TURN
ENJOY
JL&B


5 comments:

  1. Love this one and the picket fence remeidned me of when i was a kid I alwys thought the perfect dream home had a white pciket fence around it. Thank you for juggling this memory of childhood.
    Blessings

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  2. after i saw the line, i just couldn't get it off my head. so i had to write something. nice poem. keep up the good work. here's my link

    http://dishi-tales.blogspot.com/2011/07/simple-white-picket-fence.html

    :)

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  3. Love this. I'm with Bethe, there's something about a white picket fence that triggers so many memories.. Good job as usual..

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  4. Thank you so much my friends !

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  5. A the white picket fence from the 40's and 50's,takes me back to my childhood.They were like flowers in the small towns through out the country.Thanks for making me remember my childhood. O,by the way a great poem,once again.

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