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My intent here is to write a poem from the prompt I give to you , the reader, in hopes that it will inspire something and get others to write with me.

Saturday, April 2, 2011

Todays Prompt is 15 words or less

Today we ask that you write on a bitter breakup...  the only catch is that you have to do it in 15 words or less...OURS IS...

sour is the stain
left by the
heart you crushed
as you bit into adultery


OH OUCH !!!
YOUR TURN
ENJOY
JL&B
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9 comments:

  1. Secret SquirrelApril 2, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    No doctor able to mend
    the dreams broken by your feet stomping on them

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  2. JL DodgeApril 2, 2011 at 5:49 AM

    Hey Secret Squirrel...
    VERY WELL DONE !
    I went to your blog but you havent posted for a long time, I read the story of the girl who died and the funeral, very sad.

    Hope to see you here often !
    JL&B

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  3. LisaApril 2, 2011 at 7:13 AM

    Here's mine. Love this prompt

    Lisa
    InspiredbyLisa – Breakup

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  4. Susie SwansonApril 2, 2011 at 7:23 AM

    Mercy me, mercy my
    I just want
    to curl up
    and die... lol

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  5. PennyApril 2, 2011 at 10:28 AM

    Oo! good stuff. I've linked mine in!

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  6. Bethe77April 2, 2011 at 10:53 AM

    Ouch!
    That is good!
    I will have to think upon this one a bit. I will be back to write. Just is a hard one.
    Thank you for the great prompts.
    Blessings

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  7. Helena WhiteApril 2, 2011 at 12:01 PM

    Oh my, sour is the stain...great line!

    ♥ ஆ ~.^

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  8. Josie Two ShoesApril 2, 2011 at 12:08 PM

    You crossed the line
    one more time
    I'm gone
    Don't say I didn't warn you

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  9. Gemma WisemanApril 2, 2011 at 3:40 PM

    I think we have all been stained with this situation at some stage! A great piece!

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