- Refrain 1 (A1)
- Line 2 (b)
- Refrain 2 (A2)
- Line 4 (a)
- Line 5 (b)
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- Line 7 (a)
- Line 8 (b)
- Refrain 2 (A2)
- Line 10 (a)
- Line 11 (b)
- Refrain 1 (A1)
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- Refrain 2 (A2)
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- Refrain 1 (A1)
- Refrain 2 (A2)
OURS IS...
She kissed him softly
She kissed him softly on his lips
as she says her final goodbye
upon his brow her teardrop drips
Into the cold darkness he slips
as she does her best not to cry
She kissed him softly on his lips
He opens his eyes, her heart skips
but it is just another lie
upon his brow her teardrop drips
Tonight holds a lunar eclipse
she can see it in the clear sky
She kissed him softly on his lips
She remembers love, little clips,
of those happier days gone by
upon his brow her teardrop drips
He's left her now, her heart it grips
to let go she knows she must try
She kissed him softly on his lips
upon his brow her teardrop drips
This is only our second try at this, we hope we did it justice !!
YOUR TURN
ENJOY
JL&B
You did it justice for sure. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteGreat work JL !
ReplyDeleteI find this form tricky but I've has a bash at one.
Great work. I attempted a villanelle not long ago and yours puts mine to shame :)
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